Writing Reference- First date! by Mickey

One day, I'm woke up early and get dress with fastest skill in the world. Today was First date with beauty girl. I can't wait to be with her. it's cool if i hold her hand. I'm very excited it make me can't ate anything. I'm always watched the clock and there she's oh! she's here!! i very happy to walk with her .we seem like a happy couple. We played game together. Have a great lunch time with many people sit beside and the food that not even seem like food but it great because of her.

It was a great day,I wish that i will be there with her again.

Short story-Rise up!!

Did you ever feel like "loser"? The feeling like that you are so useless man and you feel like you want to claim up form this deep hole with no bottom. Here is story of my life.I'm Captain Airsoft team. We start team with Friend that love to spend time on same thing.We start to play together and One day, that we're all thinking to the a plan, that change our life until now. We want to be famous in BB gun society. We want to change our hobby to be the part of our's life. We start to asking form the owner's field for the challenge and wait for that day.When that day came... We're look like Fresh men in high school. We lose every match that we got.We lost every confidence. In this situation, we all like losing everything that we has every trust in. In that situation, I feel like it not the end. We have to keep walking. I start to say something that make my team feel better. "It first time, next time we will take that thing! We're love to play this toy. Don't giving up my friend!". we can see smile form each other . So we start over again.We start to have a practice day, to practice our skill. We practice really hard. we go to every challenge . we do it all over and over again to make us stronger. Today we hold 3 trophy in 3rd division. We proud to have that day. Everyone ever fall down but it have few people that try to claim up to see bright-sun light again.

Days in hospital

At the hospital, I sat on a boring small, plastic chair waiting a quarter of an hour for the doctor inspect. Here he comes the doctor with thick eyeglasses with huge tummy chatting with my parents. A minute later he puts a big-metal ice cream stick in to my mouth and stare at my tongue using a flashlight, then he want me to go back to sit in that small chair. As soon as I went out I wanted to relax but the nurse bring me to another room. She told me a bad news; I had to spent 3 days laying down on a bed in a small room. Then that same nurse pole me with a small needle, it hurts.

Every single day i had to take drug, with a horrible taste and a gigantic size. Three days later i felt so fantastic and full with energy. As the result of getting bored with patient.


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Science Museum

One day, My mom and dad took my sisters and me to science museum. I was very excited because this is the first time I have been there. At the museum, we can walk around. the museum has divide in a lot of zone.

The first thing in my mind was the Sci-show, but it will be begin around 11 am., so my mom took me to the exhibition hall. I learn a lot from this museum not only science but I learn to read the hard word, it's a science vocabulary. I have fun with the museum. I hope I will be there again.


Sep 1, 2010
Fun

Writing References - School and a Cab

School and a Cab
By: Natthanette Choovet (Popp) G.10M

In a long dark street, I with nothing but an empty basket was shoved into a cab. I don’t know if it was me or someone behind who had pushed me through this entire wide journey in the first place. I have no idea where is the destination. All I know is this voyage would take a really long distance, which, somehow, I know I will soon arrive. The basket is gradually filled as I have gone further and further, but it’s never full. Yet, it is as well getting heavier. I don’t see the point of carrying it, but it would be better to reach the terminus with the fulfilled basket than with an empty one. I have changed many cabs throughout this trip, but I have never tried to get out of the cab and take a walk – it’s too dangerous and risky.

The drivers are nice. They have driven me from places to places. Sometimes, the drivers took me to where I think it has nothing to do with my life. Sometimes, they took me to the place I’d like to scream and escape. Still, I have a great time observing the places from the window inside the car, but I never get off the cab. Not that I love the cab so much. There are times when I’m sick of sitting inside a cab carrying a half-filled basket for so long that some parts of my body are numb. There’s nothing much I can do but to continue doing so. The drivers have told me many things as we travel. They told me such things like how to jump across a rainbow. I do understand the method, but since I have been sitting all the way in the cab, I have never really done it – neither seen one. Nevertheless, I’m sure if I actually see the rainbow, I might be able to jump across it the way I have been told.

Now, as far as I have traveled, I know I’ll reach the destination in no time. It is hard and uncomfortable to sit and carry such a weighty basket in a cab, but I do enjoy the journey. The heavy basket and the cab make me strong in some way. I’ll soon be able to get out of this small cab and take a walk on my own. I believe the drivers, who I don’t really know much about but truly have faith in, are doing their best to drive me to the destination. All the places I have been, all the stories I have shared inside this cab bring me such amazing moments. Without this cab, I won’t be able to reach my destination, which I’m not really sure where it is. I might be brainwashed and completely exhausted by sitting for such a long distance, carrying the basket, and listening to what the drivers have told, but it won’t be a waste of time. Sure, I will know whether if I’m right when I reach the destination. When I get out of the cab and start to take a walk. When I get to apply what the cab had given me through my own journey. And last, when I finally get a chance to jump across a rainbow.

*Some parts were cut to shorten the story. Few grammar mistakes were corrected.

Why Mamacita is Homesick ???

Home is the most comfortable place for everybody. Mamacita is homesick because she's alone with her son. Mamacita couldn't speak English at all, she can't communicate with anyone. She's not familiar with this country she lived in. Mamacita is not comfortable with the place she lived in and felt homesick.

Mamacita is alone with her son away from home. Mamacita didn't have any friend, so she felt lonely and homesick. Mamacita is lonely because she's scared to meet with people. She's alway in her room, so she didn't meet any new friend. Mamacita is homesick because she's alone.

Mamacita couldn't speak english. Mamacita can't communicate with anyone, so she don't have any friend. She didn't understand what other people are saying and she felt weird. Mamacita don't speak English, so she can't fulfill her needs and wants. Mamacita is homesick because she couln't speak English.

Mamacita is not familiar with the place where she is and felt homesick because of that. The man who saved her try to paint her room pink to make her feel like her home but she still can't feel its home. If she adapt her self to the new home she won't feel homesick but she didn't so she's homesick. SHe's not familiar with the food and people of a foreign country. Mamacita is homesick because she's not familiar with the new home.

In conclusion Mamacita is afraid to meet new people because she can't speak English. She's not familiar enough with the her new home. She didn't adapt her self to the new home. Mamacita don't have any friend because she couldn't communicate in the same language with most people. Mamacita is homesick because she's alone with her son in a foreign country.


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why is mamacita is homesick? by Mickey

Why Mamacita is homesick?

As we know Home's place that make you feel warmth, comfortable and happy when you were there. what happen if you were faraway form home. Everything seem like strange for you. Feel like you are stranger. You afraid to meet new people. that reason why Mamacita's homesick.

Everything seem like strange for Mamacita. She has to move to new place. faraway form her home. she has no friend because She can't speak English.she don't feel like she been home that why Mamacita's homesick.

Mamacita, Feel like she's stranger for everyone because she never go to meet anyone. she never speak or conversation with anyone. she sit next window all day. that why Mamacita's homesick.


Mamacita, afraid to meet new people because she can't speak English But all neighbor speak only English. She afraid to go outside because of her size Because she really homesick so she don't want to meet anyone else

She not feel the same as she been home. She feel like stranger and everything look like strange for her. she afraid to go down stair and meet people that why she is homesick.