Sunday, August 29, 2010

why is mamacita is homesick? by Mickey

Why Mamacita is homesick?



As we know Home's place that make you feel warmth, comfortable and happy when you were there. what happen if you were faraway form home. Everything seem like strange for you. Feel like you are stranger. You afraid to meet new people. that reason why Mamacita's homesick.

Everything seem like strange for Mamacita. She has to move to new place. faraway form her home. she has no friend because She can't speak English.she don't feel like she been home that why Mamacita's homesick.

Mamacita, Feel like she's stranger for everyone because she never go to meet anyone. she never speak or conversation with anyone. she sit next window all day. that why Mamacita's homesick.


Mamacita, afraid to meet new people because she can't speak English But all neighbor speak only English. She afraid to go outside because of her size Because she really homesick so she don't want to meet anyone else

She not feel the same as she been home. She feel like stranger and everything look like strange for her. she afraid to go down stair and meet people that why she is homesick.

2 comments:

  1. This essay is too short (my essay also very very short).
    It's a good reason there, "she can't speak English"
    "because of her size". Great!! xoxo dudeeeeeee

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  2. The conclusion is unclear, and more sentences are required in each paragraph. Yet, still awesome as it is :DD xx

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