Why Mamacita is homesick?
Have you ever heard the quote "Home sweet home" ? Do you think it's a good quote ? What the definition of the word "Home" in your own idea ? How different between "Home" and "House" ?
Some people think that home is the only a habitat. Some people think that home is the center of love and warmth. Some people think that home is a safe place. Some people think that home is a place of birth. I've heard that the House made from brick,but the home made from love, and I believe in what I heard.
“Mamacita” who are homesick, Because she is not her home. She sat at the window all the time. Although the man tries to change her room nearby to her home, but she still felt that it was not her home. I think I knows her feeling. No where is good as home.
In my own idea, home is the place of memories. I can smile every time I think of home. If I was her, I Probably homesick. You won't convenient when you take a bath, have a meal, or traveling. This is why Mamacita homesick.
Finally, home is the place where make us the most happiness. No matter how enormous the house are, if the people in the house create the house to be the home. House is just brick, but home is include all, mind, love, or warmth.
Aug 28, 2010
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ReplyDeleteSo far so good. You still need to work a lot more on the formatting and stuff. The first paragraph is sort of uinclear and so the conclusion. Still, good enough for the first essay of the term! xx
ReplyDeleteIntroduction or first parahgraph it's not connect to other paragraph
ReplyDeleteI also can't find the thesis statement too
like you try to wrote about why mamacita is homesick
but you wrote it about home
but it great work!